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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t say I am happy about the conclusion, but at the same time cannot imagine it going any other way. I would be lying if I didn\'t admit to bawling through the ending. I reread the whole thing this morning and was thrilled to find an update just as I was finishing. It was wonderful as a work in progress, but breathtaking as a completed piece. Well done you you and to your er. Cr.
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
With a title like Paradise Lost, I shouldn\'t have been hoping for a happy ending. And I guess in a way, it\'s realistic ending, if not the ending I personally want But But then again, do we ever truely *want* the endings where the boy doesn\'t get the girl? Heroes shouldn\'t die and the hooker turned into an accountant shouldn\'t be abandoned by her saviour, no matter how screwed up it is. But of course, real life doesn\'t play out like a Pretty Woman script, so I find myself having to accept that this was an extremely well written and realistic story.
But they should have wound up together! Well, I know it would have never worked in this frame, but.. *sniffle* He died.
Okay - Enough. Thank you for an enjoyable trip; I hope you continue to write another fanfic because you are totally gifted!
Thanks,
Karena Elizabeth
But they should have wound up together! Well, I know it would have never worked in this frame, but.. *sniffle* He died.
Okay - Enough. Thank you for an enjoyable trip; I hope you continue to write another fanfic because you are totally gifted!
Thanks,
Karena Elizabeth
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I solemny, almost never cry when reading a book/ story or looking a movie, but girl did i cry... That\'s so sad and at the same time i find it great. It\'s really goes down to the core... I am at a loss of words to describe how i liked it...
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoyed reading your story over the past few months, it\'s one of the few that I have found that have touched me so. I am looking forward to future stories of yours for you are quite gifted.
I read quite alot of hp fanfic and although I usually enjoy something of angsty humorromaromantic, yours actually reached out and grabbed me. The ending was excellent especially how she actually had the final word.
Thank you for sharing this with us,
Blessed Be,
Demonic Angel
I read quite alot of hp fanfic and although I usually enjoy something of angsty humorromaromantic, yours actually reached out and grabbed me. The ending was excellent especially how she actually had the final word.
Thank you for sharing this with us,
Blessed Be,
Demonic Angel
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how to adequately express my gratitude for such a beautiful story. It was truly a job well done.
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Absolutly wonderful!!
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am crying
Okay - I am crying and sobbing openly and my son is wondering what on EARTH is wrong with his mother!
This is one of the most beautifully written fics I have ever read! And it is breaking my heart that it ended this way. But as a writer with a FORMER beta who had to fight to keep the integrity of my fic in place, (despite her wishes in the direction SHE wanted it to go) I\'m glad you stood by your guns. In real life, not everything ends up rosy and bright.
Zee
Okay - I am crying and sobbing openly and my son is wondering what on EARTH is wrong with his mother!
This is one of the most beautifully written fics I have ever read! And it is breaking my heart that it ended this way. But as a writer with a FORMER beta who had to fight to keep the integrity of my fic in place, (despite her wishes in the direction SHE wanted it to go) I\'m glad you stood by your guns. In real life, not everything ends up rosy and bright.
Zee
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT LIKE IT!!!! HATE THAT YOU KILLED SEVERUS! WELL WRITTEN BUT CAN NOT GET PAST WHAT YOU DID TO THEM. NEED HAPPY ENDINGS!!
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness - what a superbly melancholy, heart rending latest chapter - I loved it!
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so good, but so sad. Please don\'t let this be the end! You never stop amazing me with your style. Thanks for update.