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for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

by Veresna

person Hermy
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is the most exquisite Snape fic I\'ve ever read.
person liz
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant you made me cry.you should probably do another story of orlando at hogwarts or something like that. your writeing is fabulous. and i love how your name spells out severus snape.
person beth
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was beautiful i almost cried
person Zen Girl
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read countless Severus Snape fan-fictions. This one is the first one I have read that keeps Severus within the box JKR has painted for him. Who knows if he will live or die...I have a fear that he will die in the series. I remain hopeful though.....who knows. Well written and researched. Good show!
person alex
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! The best Snape I have had the pleasure to read, and I have read quite a bit. After he left her I was tempted to stop reading as I was as heart broken as Celia. I did finish it. It was worthly of the effort.
Congratulations, I will look for other work of yours.
alex
person Black Cat
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I spent the better part of the day reading this and was amazingly impressed. Thank you for sharing it with us. It was my first Het. and I hope they all are as lovely as this.
person Danielle
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well...I finished it. I\'m crying, but I finished it damnit! *sniff* I\'m sad he had to die, but I believe it all worked out in the end for the best. You are very talented and manage to make me feel as if I\'m really there with the characters, which is very disconcerting when you do the explicit scenes let me tell. . This was a fantastic story!!! And I hope Lucius Malfoy got his ass killed in the end...along with the others who hurt her. *huff* I can\'t wait to see what you put out next.....I\'ll be on the lookout.
person Kikoughela
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, I haven\'t read a Harry Potter fic in *ages* that could even slightly compare with this! It\'s excellent my dear; very well done! The style is fluent, and the quotes give it the taste of class that most fics severely lack. Although the ending was not exactly what I was hoping for, I understand that it was imperative for the overall theme of the fic. Again, wonderful job, and also I was astounded by the actual physical imagery- it\'s detail blew me away! Anyway, I hope to read more from you soon! -Cheers!
person Elizabeth
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Where to start? The past two nights of my insomnia have been filled with reading LLPL. I am finishing at 6 am, so I can\'t promise how lucid my review will be. I was intrigued and touched by your Severus. I shuddered at his cruelty. I swooned at his care. The last 3 or 4 chapters I read in tears; I\'ve had the experience of wandering through the empty rooms of a place that I\'ll no longer be in with the person I love(d). Whether you have as well or not, you captured the essence of the experience precisely. I\'m not a novice fic reader; my best estimate is only to say that I\'ve read hundreds of fics, long and short, of every pairing. This makes at least the top ten, without a doubt. I send you my congratulations and praise for a brilliantly spun tale.

~Elizabeth
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Ms. Ussep! I very much enjoyed the read. When I finished reading Loves Labours, Paradise Lost, I was left with amazement. Fantastic!