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for A Night Out With Snape

by famlia

person Aroyo
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Harry, but also fervently wish this ass would grow some effing balls! Your Harry's a wus. Its painful to keep reading this for so many chapters with no avail to his timidity. I hope he defies LM and kicks his butt! Or they form a functional threesome. Either way, LM needs to learn a lesson!
person Aroyo
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love ballsy Harry! Great job with ch 12 and 13. Lucius learned his lesson and the 3some formed. its all good. Thanks for writing such a great story :D
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept, i'm more of a Harry/Lucius person myself but still enjoyable to read <3
person GGreen
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 13: Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm Good. Loved the under the desk work, and asking Remus to join them was priceless. Harry snapping was long over due and you wrote it really well.
person RD Wind
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I always review at the end... but wow... what great twists and turns.

The sex was amazing and if one read and used the little images ability in their brain, well, the trysts were described in detail to the point that they could be imagined easily.

As usual, you write well and I enjoyed reading it.

--RD
person Tamura
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor harry. snape just doens\'t want to believe that he could possibly honestly desire him more than just lustfully. but that club scene was rather hilarious, and the way snape kept teasing him.... i know they both had it in them
person Tamura
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
strong chapter. i loved it. harry and severus can be quite amusing, can\'t they?
person PotionsPet
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! That last part about about Sev and Lucius jumping out of bed to tend to Harry\'s daughter, I can imagine that happening! *snickers about \'Big Bad Ex-Death Eaters\' cooing at a lil baby* Great fic, some humor, some angst, very hot parts.......5 stars!
person ChiChi
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a happy ending! So cute! I love this story, it was absolutly wonderful and original! I astually love all your stories and can\'t wait for you to write another one! ^_^
person allana
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it wow what a climactic ending to glad thst sev finally got his revenge so giddy with happiness i bow down to the queen of stories thanks for the great update and wow a beautifull daughter maybe you could write a sequal talking about what happened after the birth and so on and so forth thanks lots of love to you always allana