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for Heavenly Angel

by teshara

person illnevertell
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Wow, I love this story! Snape is so old fashioned and this is the first fic I have read that paired Ron and Luna.
I think they make a cute couple. I am looking forward to reading more. post more soon please.


~ Jaimie ~
person spaz141
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope it was Dr. Granger sipping the tea because really how did Mrs. Weasley get there? Interesting chapter - I can\'t believe he fainted. Thanks for the update.
person spaz141
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update, enjoyable.
person hephastus
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is highly intriguing and nicely written; I look forward to the next chapters. You have an original writing style that I find very pleasing. I await the next chapters anxiously!
Helen
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is rated PG-13 on Lordandladysnape.com but here it\'s R. What\'s up with that?
person jeanette
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bails... wrotwrote bails. Loved the chapters but I was so tired I read the last word as Balls the first time... I\'m still cleaning the keyboard.

I can not wait to see the rest of the \"old customs\", Severus and Ginny could collude and have Hermione neatly wrapped up within a week if they wanted, thoug it would have to be fast before Hermione does her research into \"old customs\".

\"What do you mean the custom dictates that the prospective spouse has to host his chosen lady for a week?\" Hermione asked Ginny with a puzzled look, Ron after all hadn\'t done anything like that with Luna.
Almost as if reading her mind Ginny answered, \"It\'s to prove that he is well able to care for a lady in the manner to which she should become accustomed. Ron didn\'t bother with Luna as she was well aware of his \'ability to support\', but if he is offering to follow the old customs it will give you a chance to look over his \'property\' so to speak.\" The last said with an slightly evil grin.
Hermione just blushed remembering some of the things Severus had suggested, in graphic detail even, in his first letter. Luckily for Hermione she was so deep in thought she didn\'t realise she was licking her lips...

Jeanette :)
person jessicat1982
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. it\'s well written, funny and I\'m supprised it hasn\'t been given more reviews. I love these kind of light hearted fics. I hope you updaten.
jn.
person Katie
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!! Please update soon!
person spaz141
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
From your A/Ns I take it this story is already completeed? I enjoy your work and look forward to reading more. I like the premise and share your opinions on correspondence. I do have a collection of letters I have saved, even some love letters - with the idea that my grandchildren will some day enjoy them.

Onestiostion, where is Harry?

Thanks.
person Andrian
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is charming. I have laughed outloud several times and I do love the characterizations you have given the owls and everyone else