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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great beginning, would love for it to be continued!
schedule
January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, i dont know why all the others haven't reveiwed. Will you update because i have? I hope so, cause it'd be a shame if you didn't!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!
schedule
July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow really creative writing
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright here is a review.
for
every
line
you
must
write
a
new
chapter
this
is
thirteen
14 chapters
15 so
16 far
17 get
18 crackin
oh btw email me when you update.
for
every
line
you
must
write
a
new
chapter
this
is
thirteen
14 chapters
15 so
16 far
17 get
18 crackin
oh btw email me when you update.
schedule
December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit will you hurry up and update
schedule
October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I like your story. in the story hermione figures she would be a spy for the order and join voldermort, she told snape that she could imagine the worst that could happen to her. duh! being a woman who admittedly at least in the story has only been with 2 boys and they bored her and for the first time gave draco her first blow job, she has no idea what she is about to get into...
Hermione is so smart, but in this story she is so dumb.... I cant wait to read the next stories. but I would of done things differently, I would of had voldermort give her a choice to either kill a whole innocent family of muggles or get in a circle of men, strip and show off all of her body and then take each man in every way possible. mouth, ass, pussy. and she could take 3 guys at once, a bunch of times, pull a train. have her take at least 20 or 30 guys or maybe more. and her reaciton to the choices and the sex would of been great....
Hope you get enough reviews so you will keep posting..... great idea, well written too......
Hermione is so smart, but in this story she is so dumb.... I cant wait to read the next stories. but I would of done things differently, I would of had voldermort give her a choice to either kill a whole innocent family of muggles or get in a circle of men, strip and show off all of her body and then take each man in every way possible. mouth, ass, pussy. and she could take 3 guys at once, a bunch of times, pull a train. have her take at least 20 or 30 guys or maybe more. and her reaciton to the choices and the sex would of been great....
Hope you get enough reviews so you will keep posting..... great idea, well written too......
schedule
August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I cant wait to read more
schedule
July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what will it take to make you update
schedule
July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi great so far
when will the next bit be up?
when will the next bit be up?