rate_review Reviews

I wouldn\'t worry too much about the flames from that certain individual. Some people just enjoy flaming for no reason. I\'m inclinded to think this is one of those case since he/she/it is appearently willing to flame you on two different sites over the same story.

And that\'s just redundant and stupid.

You are a great writer and you shouldn\'t let this ninny bother you. I know this is an easy thing for me to say cause I didn\'t just receive a flame (but I do know they suck immense You Your story is good and is worth the read, so don\'t get any doubts about that. I have spoken! Now get on with the next chapter. ;)


hugs,

Padfoot.

Very glad to have gotten to the story here :D

You are a wonderful writer whether or not the \"muse\" is cooperating! I love your story and I put it on my recommended reading list. You develop your characters wonderfully. Please keep it up! I know how hard it is to update frequently but please try!

What a great read this has been so far - took me a while, but it was worth it (and the prologue too). I really like your characterisations, and your plot is interesting and compelling. Hope you update soon.

Ha! *rubs hands together* I

First off, I loved the cowboy and Snape\'s reaction to that redneck. I think this last chapter went fairly well all in all. It\'s not quite as fluid as the others I\'ll admit. Personally I find that getting it on the page is the easy part, while reading and re-reading, catching and correcting the small details that make a great story even better, that\'s the hard part. I\'m at the end of my story on fanfiction and I don\'t think I ever posted a chapter on the same day I wrote it. Hopefully I\'ve completely forgotten it the next day so I can be more critical, catch those small things. Like you said it\'s the small nit picky things, \"put a comma before that \'and\' not a period\"...You are doing great. Four kids? For your sake I hope most of them are in school. I work full time and have a two year old, boy am I lucky to get any time to write...Best of luck to you. Shelly

Okay, I\'m up to chapter 14. I am glad that they finally kissed in chapter 10. It seemed like FOREVER! Your Snape really hates himself. Alot. So what is next for these cautious lovers?
I will catch up the last of it tomorrow.
Cheers.

Hello,
Just read chapter 15 of this story and have to say that its a very intriguing story, full of plot-twists, lovely characterizations and interactions, and the chemistry between Rowena and Severus is entertaining. that \'little bloodthirsty Ravenclaw\' is just a good match for our snarky potions master....but of course have to keep in mind that Ravens ARE not only scavangers but also Prdators to some birds and animals. this story with her developing counter curses got me thinking.....would a curious intellictual like Rowena think about trying to produce a counter for the Killing Curse? she\'d have to do it in Secret most times, though being where she is now, she could probably tell Albus and Severus about it but who knows. Can\'t wait for term starts, I hope she will be able to put both Potter AND Malfoy in their places proving that she is indeed neutral.
ohh well nice chatting with you, hope you bring alot of chapters out soon.
Until then keep up the great work

Gypsy.

Okay, I only got through chapter 4... I need to get some sleep.
I really like this story and I am going to recommend it to some of my pals.

Rowena isn\'t a Mary Sue and I like that. I like the fact that she has faults. Will teaching Hermione change her mind about muggleborn students? I\'m sure that you answer that in the next few chapters.
I think Rowena idolizes Severus a bit. Sees him through rose-colored glasses. I like how she doesn\'t behave for the most part as Severus expects. Throws him a little. It\'s fun.

I\'ll read more tomorrow and review again.

Cheers.

ah havent I seen this somewhere before? nice.