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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has taken me some time to get this far in the story but it is well done in my opinion. I have read a lot of fan fiction and everyone has thier own style. The key to a good story is to make it rich in text to fix the readers imagination in your world. You do a great job - a bit idealistic with love and forgivness but it is OK with me. Fantasy is just that! You (the writer) are welcoming us into your world and those who enter it (the reader) should be respectful of that just as they should be when walking into your home! I like this story and the emotions it envokes and the images it creates so please keep the muse happy!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This last one is a wonderful chapter. Maybe this is the best so far.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Powerful chapter, really advanced the story on several levels. Merlin\'s beard, I want more of this story!!! but of course waiting patiently. ;-)
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here, reading.
I love this story..
fascinating how fast you work.
I preferred the bitter-type Sev, but this version is also god to read about.
I love this story..
fascinating how fast you work.
I preferred the bitter-type Sev, but this version is also god to read about.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!! Keep it coming. I can\'t wait to see how he cleans up the mess he\'s made! ^.^
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful!! can\'t wait for the next chapter x
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaah! Icould just imagine Severus\'s face when Remus asked him to be his Best Man. Brilliant.......
I also loved the part where Severus visits Rowena ,It had me nearly in tears.
I truly love your story. I can\'t wait for the next chapter......
Ann, aka Witte Heks.
I also loved the part where Severus visits Rowena ,It had me nearly in tears.
I truly love your story. I can\'t wait for the next chapter......
Ann, aka Witte Heks.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad to see he\'s coming to his senses, and that Rowena isn\'t falling into his arms without a fight.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I\'m still out here!!! And still enjoying this fic. When it\'s all finished, I\'ll have to sit down and reread the whole thing. I do have a slight feeling that some of these last chapters seem a little \"clipped\". I can\'t express this better yet. I hope you are still having fun writing and don\'t feel too much pressure to complete. After all, I know how demanding we are on our favorite authors!!! Best Regards!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am here, and I am reading your fic. :)
Criticism.... but I can\'t recall anything wrong with your fic..
a bit dark, than again I like it dark...
I thought Rowena\'s emotional inbalance comes from pregnancy..
but that would had been too sentimental...
please, please, please... more Severus.. more of his feelings
thanks:)
Dorka, Hungary
Criticism.... but I can\'t recall anything wrong with your fic..
a bit dark, than again I like it dark...
I thought Rowena\'s emotional inbalance comes from pregnancy..
but that would had been too sentimental...
please, please, please... more Severus.. more of his feelings
thanks:)
Dorka, Hungary