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i liked it alot..hmm..i dont know wut should happend..maybe Umbridge get into her dormitory and snape be waiting outside..idk..your the author..keep up the good work!! ;-D
XOXO..byezz
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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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So, when is the new chapter going to be up?

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I\'m so sorry guys. It has been a while since I posted up a new chapter but the third chapter isnt finished yet, so you will have to wait longer. Sorry, but I am glad people are reading it.

My advice to you is to spell check your work before you post it. As for your needing help. I\'d simple suggest That Umbridge has some sick obsession with Hermoine and some how Snape got mixed up in it and is trying to protect her in his own way. Atleast thats the vibe I\'m gettting from the story. Good luck.

Too bad it was marked as a Hermione/Snape story. It would\'ve made a good Harry/Hermione. U could\'ve had him trying to figure out what was going on, as he hates Snape and Umbridge anyways. God I dunno why she has to be in it anyways. Hope she dies. Anyways u could have Harry figure it out and burst in and be the hero. Sorry, I\'m a big romantic, well kinda. Anywas seeing it\'s a Hermione/Snape one, eww, I would suggest u make it seem he is under control by Umbridge, she\'s just a sadistic cow anyways so maybe u could say she was just turned on by it and wanted her turn to humiliate Hermione. Myabe Snape could break out of it while hurting her in the next chapter and they form some sort of friendship, going into more? I dunno. Just a suggestion. Hope I helped.

I\'ve really enjoyed this and found it interesting and unique. Please keep writing.