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I\'m intrigued. I\'m curious though, the marriage law was enacted to replenish the wizarding population. How is it they don\'t have any children after 11 years? Or have we just not met them yet? Thanks for the update, very interesting.

Hermione\'s breakfast attire: Do-me boots. Leather micro-mini. Navel ring in Gryffindor colors. White \'n\' tight tube top, sans bra. Hair wild, free and glorious (to match the boobs). Would a bomber jacket be too much?

Oh, an excellent take on the challenge! I really want to read the rest of this, I can\'t wait to see how it turns around into being SS/HG... and I love the realization that their married life might not be happy and loving (not the tack I took in my own fic, but perhaps a better one). I really hope you write more.

Wow, this is such a unique perspective from which to come at the challenge! I hope that the rest of the story is as well-written as this part! I can\'t believe what a tease the first part is, and then to have a completely unhappy Hermione married to a dominating Snape...this is going to be great. I\'m wondering where the story will take the characters now, since there\'s such an obvious lack of emotion between Hermione andpe. pe. Is Snape going to be the cold villian that JK writes him as early in the books or the shaded, troubled man of later books, with an exterior as cold as Siberia and a twisted sad core?

Please please PLEASE write more! ^^

Oh, I like your spin on the challenge. I can\'t wait to see how Snape reacts.

Very interesting so far. Definitely something different. Please pot more soon!

J :)

i like this unique avenue to this challenge. although i\'m a bit surprised to see hermione so complacent. i can\'t imagine HOW snape got her to wear only black robes and do her hair a certain way. she just doesn\'t seem like the kind of gal to submit to such things. but i\'m really looking forward to seeing more of this story. theythey got together, how their relationship has been and what will happen now that the marriage act is being repealed.

Something new! I\'m addicted, which of course means you must continue to update daily or I will pout. But it sounds like it\'s going to be great; fabulous job!

I love what you have here so far. Although I do enjoy reading the challenge fics, it\'s good to see one where they aren\'t in an extremely loving and blissful marriage. I\'m patiently waiting to see how you\'re going to make it progress from here.

I vowed to never read another marriage challenge fic, but...this idea is so different. So here I am. What\'s next? thanks.