rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story please hurry up and update.

best wishes

pleasdatedate soon i love this story and your style of writing is maybe one of the best i have seen in a while

interesting way to go. Can\'t wait to read more of it, pleaseate ate soon!

I\'m intrigued. I\'d love for your chapters to be longer, but I know how hard that can be. If you are still looking for a beta, I\'m always free to read, though lord knows I neve find time to write anymore. my email is jeslyn_nighthawk@hotmail.com, and if you are interested in reading any of my writing, as a sort prelim interview, my author pages are at http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=349135 and http://www.lordandladysnape.net/viewuser.php?uid=736 . The first has all of my fanfics to date, and the second has the first several chapters of my only SS/HG to date.

I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

In review #1, I visualized Hermione in biker chick garb as a way of saying \"Up yours, I\'m outta here.\" After chapter 2, I see that Snape was not keeping her cooped up for fun. He was keeping her safe. Their relationship is . . . distant. I\'m not surprised they don\'t have kids; are they man & wife in name only?

Looking forward to seeing things warm up. Maybe biker chick garb would help.

Completely understandable, I\'m working on finishing up my semester as weactuactually, I should be studying for my experimental final that is tomorrosteastead of reading this....ahh, the joys and follies of procrastination). I do have to say that Severus was a bit different in this than what I expected....it just seened to me that Hermione was so miserable in the beginning that there was more happening in the marriage than that polite ignorance and avoidance that came about, although in retrospect I like that a lot better than Snape being an ass. Why couldn\'t Hermione go to University again? Did I miss that? Or was that a precaution against Deatheaters? Did she rarely leave the house at all, then? I\'m intrigued.

this story is great, i love the idea of starting the story at the \'end\' of the marriage, its different and i cant wait to read more, please update soon
hugs shaz