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Very twisted, I LOVE IT! I thought it was all sweet and then you masterfully turn the tables and deal me a wild card. I\'ll have another fic like this please, lol :D

Now that\'s the Draco I know and Love.........................

Trio

WHAT, a one shot??? *bangs head on labtop* nooooo...& just when it was starting to get even more interesting. *lol* wow i have to say that you realy have something here. you have a plot going. you should continue(it is your decition after all). But other wise this is fantastic. Great job & good luck in the future. :D

Great story!! God I wish I would as good as you are but thank God you are my beta! Please write more I\'m beging you!!

OMG! It\'s was sooo good but why? did Draco have to be so bad? Why? :) Actually, I liked it and I hope there is more. Please let there be more!!!!

I\'ve read your work over at naughty-seduction.net and I\'ve always thougt wat was fantastic, it\'s wonderful that you\'re writing HP fanfics, especially with Draco/Hermione pairing! Can\'t wait for your next work.

Hey Fiona! Raffy here from the dracohermione comm.*waves*

I just finished reading your fic and I must say I

That was a truly wicked story. I liked how Draco had devised his ultimate plan to become the next Dark Lord and have Hermione at his side as his queen. I\'ve read stories where he plots to become the next Dark Lord and has created intricate plans to meet his goals and this is one of the best ones out there. Two rousing thumbs up! ;)

A most interesting premise - the Ambitious Slytherin at work.

Although, I must say that the potion created by Voldemort - while it is true that Voldemort is an accomplished Potions Master having obtained thgradgrades in Hogwarts and all; the potion could have been used by Voldemort himself on his enemies so that they could do his bidding.

Perhaps a better explanation for Hermione\'s loyalty and obedience could be found in Lucius\' relationship with Narcissa. The elder Malfoy could have revealed to Draco either with intent or without the means of binding his wife to him, in order for submission by a woman worthy of being his \'queen\'. The difference is, Lucius was content to serve the Master, while Draco wanted to be the Master.

Wow this was really good. A few grammatical errors (mainly pronoun references) but nothing that detracted from the story. What a story, told very well. I love that Draco had such a cunning plan. Sexy and hot this is begging for more to the story. Will Hermione end up like Narcissa - cold and queenly? Hummm?
Wonderful story, supriaing and sexy. Look forwar to reading more of your writing.