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Okay, you definitely have to keep writing this! I absolutely LOVE Neville stories! Unfortunately he\'s a very underated character. I\'m wondering where you are going with this as far as character development though. I\'m happyt Net Neville is bringing out Draco\'s protective instincts and making him want to be nice, but why is that? I think that you need to elaborate a bit more if it\'s going to be the basis of a real relationship. Does he feel bad about Neville\'s parents? Or does he observe how Neville\'s always on the outside (even when he\'s surrounded by his friends) and Draco can relate to that...? Or what? It has to be more than pity, doesn\'t it? Because I don\'t think Draco would be sexual with Neville simply out of pity. Or maybe you could have Neville prove his worth to Draco by sticking up for him, or helping him in school or lningning to him with insight or something to make Draco see what his good qualities are (like loyalty, showing a genuine interest in others, sticking up for what he believes in, being good at DADA and Herbology). Anyways, I\'m really looking forward to the rest of this story. The dream sequence in the infirmary was pretty good and frankly the thought of Draco in black silk pj bottoms is damn hot! Good job!!! Keep it up!

that\'s it!? hurry it up, this is the cutest story ever!

<3<3<3<3 I love this story! You are such a great writer and I would have never thought of Draco and Neville being a couple, but with your story, you certainly have changed my mind. No doubt about that. Keep up the good work! Can\'t wait till the next update! *snuggles*

Interesting fic. Would like to read more.

This is really good, but I noticed, in the first chapter particularly, that you tended to switch from past to present tense, and vice versa, and that got a bit confusing sometimes. But REALLY good!!! Please update soon!

YEAHHHHH! very good start buddy o mine. Who the hell is kate?