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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be long road...thanks for the update.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....Wow, I kind of love this. My only suggestion would be to throw in someool ool reactions--There are more students at Hogwarts than the Golden Trio and Ginny. Other than that, keep updating!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How is this going to turn into something more? Seems near impossible. Interesting. Thanks for the update.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is not a badly written story, but you may want to doublecheck your word choices... a number of words in this story don\'t mean what you seem to think they mean. For example, \"...Good intentioned moral tidings,\" when Harry confronts Snape about Hermione\'s disapanceance. You used that to mean wishes or thoughts, but it really means news or information. Good tidings is good news, not good intentions. There are a number of other little mistakes like that; it\'s always possible to figure out what you mean, but it winds up making the story seem less polished. Would you like me to beta your vocabulary in this story? I wouldn\'t mind.
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading \"death\" over at L&LS but my computer refused to let me in today. Your Snape is amazing. He really has such a childish quality to his actions, much as Snape in the book has as opposed to fannon Sn I h I have enjoyed your other works and look forward to future updates when Snape and Hermione, um, get along.\"Hermione\'ll get caught all right..but in a different type of bind. (hint.)\"
With any luck, this will be what I think it is. I anxiously await chapter 20.
With any luck, this will be what I think it is. I anxiously await chapter 20.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GO GO GO WOOOHOOO!!! keep up the good work, u have me hooked! *happy face*
~Arachnead
~Arachnead
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hagrid is sooooooooooooooooooooo stupid! \"Oh I almost killed them\"
Okay I don\'t like him, I think it obvious.
But I want to see our sexy Snape save Hermione.
So please A next chapter would be wonderful!!!!!! :)
Orestes
(y foy for my english I \'m french)
Okay I don\'t like him, I think it obvious.
But I want to see our sexy Snape save Hermione.
So please A next chapter would be wonderful!!!!!! :)
Orestes
(y foy for my english I \'m french)
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For a minute there I thought you killed Hagrid. Well Severus is off to save Hermione, should be scarey fun. thanks.
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I hope Hagrid is under imperious or something, he just can\'t be bad. thanks.