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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...read the story on Ashwinder....
I plan on monitoring it here...
brilliant story--I\'m enthralled! What a gift you have. Don\'t fret the \'dry spell\'; I\'m sure it\'s temporary, happens to all writers.
I\'ll be waiting patiently for further adventures.
I plan on monitoring it here...
brilliant story--I\'m enthralled! What a gift you have. Don\'t fret the \'dry spell\'; I\'m sure it\'s temporary, happens to all writers.
I\'ll be waiting patiently for further adventures.
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! Hurrah! Holden\'s brought back \"the git\"! And I DID love it! The dementors attacking Hogwarts was an unexpected and interesting twist, and I enjoyed the way you are beginning to tie up \"loose ends\" with explanations Now on to the rescue---and to whatever pyrotechnics will be necessary for Hermione and Harry to save Snape.....or vice versa??? More, more!!! With thanks, the countrymouse
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 27 - YAY, YOU\'RE BACK!!!!! Thank you for the new chapter. I\'m glad Ron went to get McGonagall - fear and precaution can be good things. Okay, not get back to saving Severus, please!
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your metemorphosis of Snape from git to hero. It is believable the way you write it for you don\'t make it an easy change for him. The transision between the chapter 21 and 22 is a bit abrupt and hard to follow at first. You need some bridging paragraphs in their somewhere. And something is messing with your words. The errors are too blantant to be yours. (wordsruntogether or repeatedpeated weirdly). Has your spell checker gone crazy or is this a software translation glitch?
I like this story very much and I hate the weird spelling glitches to distract from such a good tale.
I like this story very much and I hate the weird spelling glitches to distract from such a good tale.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story i want more updates as fast as you can write the i can;t wait to continue the story. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writter and you are a little bit evil....
please don\'t let us wait to long.... I want to know what is behind this curtain, and what is with severus... maybe both of them could die together in love -maybe that would be better being bond in eternity than one of them living with all that pain....please go on!! update soon, please!!
please don\'t let us wait to long.... I want to know what is behind this curtain, and what is with severus... maybe both of them could die together in love -maybe that would be better being bond in eternity than one of them living with all that pain....please go on!! update soon, please!!
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October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are truly evil. a genius yes but evil nonetheless. please tell us what happens.
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I await your next update. Your writing is powerful, creative, and absolutely amazing. This is great.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THis is a most wonderful story! so far! You are an amazing writter and I can\'t wait to read more of you work. Please hurry and write more to this story!
Hope to be reading lots more soon!
Jammar
Hope to be reading lots more soon!
Jammar
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s very enjoyable to read a SS/HG marriage fic that doesn\'t have a compliant acceaccepting Hermione.
Hermione\'s firey attitude is wonderful and you\'ve caught Snape\'s gittishness very well.
Hermione\'s firey attitude is wonderful and you\'ve caught Snape\'s gittishness very well.