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for The Birthday Gift

by SugarSushi

person Edalene
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY YA! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
person rycequeen13
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the sory so far . har is a little out har har but hey I like it .

A cliffie ? you are evil !


please write more i am awaiting how draco settles this Love hate thing he has ?

will they go back to being friends ?
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again: EVIL!

A whole weekend huh? I\'m seeing prospects there... *grins*
person Lady LeNay Malfoy
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! And I am Glad you updated so soon. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I SO F****NG HATE YOU! You can
person The Blue Lady
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! What a cliffie! Going to the Malfoy Villa in the South of France, to see if he can get Hermione to recognize an \"O\". ;D I think she we will be able to \"feel\" the difference once Draco has his way \"pleasuring\" her! What a present! Keep going!!

~~ The Blue Lady ~~
person Apollonia
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, yes! She\'s going to get laid by Draco and experience the great \'O\' for the first time in her life. YAnd ind it\'s sweet and cool that he has feelings for her as well. Looks like he wants more from her than just her body. Hehe. Please update soon! ;)
person stef
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story and a great original idea, hopefully draco and hermione will spend all weekend in bed!!!!
person cofaym
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU TEASE! Next chapter please. Please? Pretty Please!?!
person Jules
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I look forward to seeing how this progresses.
I always like D & Hr stories when they have grown-up and become friends. There is so much potential to write about.