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for The Birthday Gift

by SugarSushi

person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! You MUST update soon!
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter. Looking forward to the next :)
person The Devil
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Smut-free chapter yet equally enticing!
I think you need a beta reader shcek some typos. :)
person JennaSlytherin
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutly awesome! You need to update right now!!!
person amethystangel
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\'k you caught me peeking, so now give me some more.... YUM!
person deedee
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! The smut is coming:) I want to read more. Update. Update. Update.
person illnevertell
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!! How could you just leave that hanging ???? It\'s going to kill me having to wait to read more of this story.
It is an awesome start. I am hooked ! Please post more soon ! * Kudos * This story is brilliant so far!

~ Jaimie ~
person Selina
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope you updae soon!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You evil, evil writer! LEAVE YOUR READERS HERE! Grr....-plots your death-
person The Devil
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARRRGH! You left me hanging!
This is really good so please update ASAP and make the sex scenes really raunchy.*impish grin*