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for The Birthday Gift

by SugarSushi

person luvhp
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that is SO not fair! This is a great idea and it had so much potential, if only if had been continued :(
*sigh*
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this shounds good! I can't wait for the next one!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh. you must update soon please. I already love this story
person gypsycarmen
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay now im ready for the weekend to begin......soon please update and alert me thanks GypsyCarmen
person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW I forgot to keep breathing!! Update as soon as possible!! PLEASE!!!!!!!
person RandH4ever
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING, PLEASE!!!!!!
person jess
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please hurry and right more im dying here......pleeeeeeeeeeaaasssee right more
person lilil
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh goshhhhh u cant stop it here! Up more zz lzz
person li
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Plezzzzz u better write next CHAP!
person Tricia
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good golly miss Molly MoonRiver! Your story was... *is* GREAT! Lol And since your story finally convinced me to write a review... I should give you another \"Wow!\" I hope you update soon because even though there was no smutty scenes yet.. I can just imagine it! *wipes sweat off forehead* Great Job!!!


Tricia =D