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for On the first day of Christmas

by h0lden

person WriterLady1031
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story you\'ve got . I. I\'ve just finished reading the last few chapters and had a absolute great time laughing with the whole bit about the game of charades. Really creative, my friend. I hope to read more.

Ciao!
person Persia
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, you RAT!!!!! What a cliffhanger! Me want kissie! Me want to see Mione and Sevie kiss! Pwease? Update soon!
person droxy
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its 111 degrees outside and I needed a winter tale.

Entertaining and very cute.
person Lady_Chaos
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. You had me laughing so hard with the butter-beer-in-Albus\'-face, and Hermione\'s-kneen, tn, that I couldn\'t stop convulsing with laughter for a good 10 minutes after. Needless to say, both my cat and my fianc
person amethystangel
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, oh man, crack up city. I\'ve lovin\' it!
person ancientgirl
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo another juicy chapter. Its actually nice to see they are being somewhat playful. At least it shows they aren\'t angry at each other. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person LadyChaos
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the BEST SS/HG stories I\'ve ever read. I\'m on the edge of my seat/sofa/loun-wha-whatever, just waiting to see what happens next between the two of them. Please keep writing!!! I can\'t wait to see what Hermione will do next! Hell, I can\'t wait to see what Severus will do next. Extra Hell, I can\'t wait to see what they\'ll do together next (smirking evilness)!
person firennissiassassin
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Lady_Chaos
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really love this story. I can\'t wait to see what will happen next! You really know how to \"write\" out the tension between Hermione and Snape. I\'m hanging on every word between them!!! Thanks for this story-Lady Chaos
person pikinanou
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ya! nice going, it\'s not christmas anymore but it\'s fun!
i don\'t know what ya have in mind but i\'ll keep reading...
*start daydreaming with snape as a christmas present...hehehehe*