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for On the first day of Christmas

by h0lden

person Shellnet
schedule July 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Funny now that we know snap his whole reson for everything he dose is love so lovey snape is real snape i wish he would have got some happyness she would have been a grate match

person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person droxy
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww thats so damn sweet and romantic.

I love happy endings.

Yes, everyone has to melt the hard ass Snape to make a romance really work for us sentimental types...

You did it in your angsty ficlet too. But do I complain about it? NOOO WAY! Its too darn good.

If you are worried about things like characterization, you need to get a a collaborative beta and you will find your confidence improving. Now understand this advice is from soemone too chicke to write anything beyond a 100 word challenge. LOL
person ancientgirl
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet ending. I\'m not a big fan of Snape getting too OOC but sometimes its nice.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I was Hermione I would castrate those three. What the hell are they doing? Can\'t they leave her in peace for one minute and mind their own business. Now Severus is probably thinking she set him up. And she is going to be very upset because I\'m sure he will start acting very cold towards her because he will be thinking she betrayed him in some way, when it was those 3 knucklheads.

Please! I implore you update this soon.
person amethystangel
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Somebody please kill those three!
person droxy
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ut-oh...

evil cliffy

LOL- drunk Albus
person Persia
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!! What a freaking cliffhanger!!!! I hope you update soon cause I almost wet myself!!!! Can\'t wait to see what his reaction is! Wonderful fic!
person SandraM
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aren\'t you absolutely cruel to us! A Cliffhanger!!!!