rate_review Reviews

An ankle fetish, hmm? Sounds promising. And I do look forward to reading that non-erotic sex scene; it's not often you see a contradiction in terms brought to life.

Please, please, please continue! A very intriguing start and I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon! Again, great job!

Kudos~

Nikki

Long and rambling you say? I don\'t think so. Excellent character description and detail.

You\'re off to a good start. I like the premise and your writing style. You definitely need a beta, though. It looks like you ran spell-check but didn\'t read back over things to make sure it corrected the words the proper way. For example, you have \"spook\" instead of \"spoke\" and \"brake\" instead of \"break.\" The author I currently beta for isn\'t doing any work at the moment, so if you would like, I can do some beta work for you. You show plenty of potential with your writing, you just need a little polishing.