rate_review Reviews

That made me cry. It was beautiful

that story was so fucking awsome... can i use that word... oh well, i already have... wow, this story was amazing, even with all they wakky and unexpected pairings... made it more interesting than it already was. this has got to be one of my favorite stories!

Very disapointed in this story, it had potential in the first two chapters then all of a sudden, WHAM they are back together, getting married, and we have no idea in hell how they did get back together, unless there was one sentence in there that explained 11 years of absence, which is very immature. And whats up with the fourth chapter? Its just a stupid song that everone skips over to get to the reading part! I have never been more disapointed in a story and author, until now. Please, take this story down and work on it a bit, before placing it back up

You went from them being seaperate to them geting married, where is the story? You know, the part that tells what happened? Then you post the same chapter twice, I don't think that was on pupose, but it should be corrected, if you have written it, I would love to read what actually happens to Harry and Lucius. If you haven't then you have alot of work ahead of you to make this a worthwhile story.

All I can say is where is the story? These are just a few scenes with the same characters. There was the potential for conflict, but you went from ooh they are apart to ooh they are married. The real story is missing. Getting to the "good" stuff does not mean giving up the plot. This seems totally random with little character development. Not only is there no transition, thre are more questions than answers. And the ending of this chapter--the children knew they were protected? Is that for real? Very cliche and lends nothing to storyline.

OMG! When are they going to meet again? It seems soo sad. Did Dumbeldore make up about Harry dating? I hope he did. What is Lucious going to do? This story is really great.

I\'m really enjoying this. Do you plan on updating any time soon?

Ok,there are two icks in this. N*SYNC is just eww and ioneione and Draco just double eww. lol. Though I really like everything else.

please please update soon like now lol i love the first chapter and i am wondering if the reason harry lefted lucius was because he was preguant with this luke person you mentioned??? any ways i think you should make harry beg lucius to take him back and have lucius play hard to get that would be great. i love this story so far and would appreciate it if you updated soon. if you need a beta reader i would be glad to help.

your biggest fan
kristle

Oh my god. . .MORE!!!
Now! More!!!

ok, ranting aside, this story looks to be good, so . . .MORE! (ok, ranting not as over as I\'d thought ^_^)

uhm, yeah, I like it . . .lol