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for Don\'t Take the Girl

by alexial

person Arlenegutie
schedule November 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You know, I remember hearing this song when it first came out, heck I even remember the music video, so I knew how this was going to end... But that still didn't stop me from reading even though I knew of would only end with me in tears, when hhbit did. Over all it was pretty well written nnd despite me ending up in tears, I really iid like it.

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so very sad, well written, but sad!!! Deb >^..^<
person amsev
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw gawds, I knew this was going to be depressing when I read the title. Sniffle. Both the song and the story made me cry. Nice job. Sigh.
person Tina
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was great. pretty sad, but after reading the actual song, it makes sense. great job with the characters, maybe you can do another one shot, about how they actually got together?