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for Sauce for the Gander

by Flyingegg

person hephastus
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet. Quite enjoyed the culinary imagery. These single sketches you\'ve been doing are extremely creative and endearing. Thank you so much.
person jenocclumency
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh...where do I buy some of that wizarding chocolate sauce??
Love the story, great job!
person Meghan
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DONT BE DONE! OMG!

I would love... LOVE... to read more ofs sts story.

So pretty please with that delightful wizard chocolate on top write another chapter.
person Cordelia
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow -- although wonderful as it is, please tell me there\'s more!

I can just picture Sev insisting that he doesn\'t share, and then trying to take Hermione\'s food while she\'s not looking. That one really made me laugh.

person ancientgirl
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You just write the best SS/HG fic! I loved this story. My favorite part was during dessert, when he told her to eat quickly and nudged her under the table. I could really see him doing that.
person mele
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooo! i want chocolate sauce like that. you\'re very naughty! but that\'s a good thing! more, more! aloha, mele
person ArienAstera
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...chocolate sauce...
person Greta
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story!!! The choc was a great idea well done! I look forward to reading more of your fics.
person MadAboutHarry
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hoping you\'ll continue this, I\'ll just borrow Severus\' last line......\"pre\"?e\"? :-) Very creative little fic; I haven\'t read one that started with a dinner and worked out this way. I had a sense while I was reading it, until the last couple of paragraphs at least, that they were already a couple before they went to dinner but were just keeping it quiet. Of course, it didn\'t turn out that way, but I think it could have been an interesting way to work it out as well. I hope you will write a second chapter.
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez Egg, that was great! The dinner was clever and the chocolate was heavenly! I love chocolate in fic. Oh, I just love chocolate, period. Makes the perfect accompaniment to sex.
Was this a one shot? All that afterglow relationship talk could lead to more. If you want to write it.
Cheers dear.