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for THE PHOENIX

by tas

person Shannon
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I just read the first 3 chappies! A long one eh? Oh this is so wonderful! I love your long stories! Well off for now!
Huggles!
person Kel
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new story! :) I love it so far, tas. Please write more soon!
person XxphenixX
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve combined all of my favorite things in the Potterverse! Hermione, Draco, Sirius and his motorbike, and the PHOENIX! I love you! Really! This is fantastic! I get to use like 12 exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!! On a slightly less happy note, I think the Harry/Hermione break up went too easily to be real. You could make it flow more if you explain that they were such good friends and they understood each other well enough or they had been growing apart in the romantic sense or something... it just seemed too convenient, you know? Other than that, I love the fic and I lwherwhere it\'s going. Hermione is going to play Quidditch! YES! Is she a chaser or a beater? I\'d guess chaser but it\'s really up to you, isn\'t it? On a slightly irrelevant note, where\'s Ginny? What do other people think of the \"new\" Hermione?Will she wear black leather year round? ::laughs hysterically:: (She should! She should!) Anyway, fantastic fic, and I can\'t wait to read more. Update!
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. This could turn out to be a truly delish story.
Has Draco not figured out that it is Hermione and Harry in the motorcycle magizine? He really couldn\'t recognize her?
Please write more soon.
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, CONTINUE!
person georgia
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s GREAT!!!!! I\'ve read some of ur other stuff and ur really good. You\'ll never get any critisism here. Keep up the good writing, and hurry with the next chapter.
person tabitoo
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow, I love this story. Even though Hermione has changed she is still somewhat in character. As long as she still likes books. I had a motorcycle when I was younger and they are fun. Please continue with this story. I can\'t wait till Malfoy sees Hermione\'s and Harry\'s tattoo\'s and puts two and two together. Anyways, keep it up.
person purerockerchi
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
omg... i loved this story! you are an excellent writer and... well i LOV LOVE this! its brilliant!