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for THE PHOENIX

by tas

person amanda
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I love your story so far and can\'t wait for what\'s to come.
person Jules
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the Halloween festivities - should be fun. Will Draco get to race?
Hope Hermione runs circles around Pansy.
I so enjoy your confident Hermione in this story.
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I have an idea Tas. Not that I really like the idea of women cat-fighting and tearing each others clothes off, but it might be interesting if Hermione\'s phoenix tattoo gets exposemehomehow during her fight with Pansy. Just an idea.
Like the fic so far. Like how Draco isn\'t automatically, comple ga- ga-ga for Hermione yet.
Cheers.
person Artraea
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it\'s good, but it stops. It needs more at the end.
person elementaldeity
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story, I like the biker angle.

elementaldeity
person Faye
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that this is a great story. Please update soon!
person Jules
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, Another tas story!
I don\'t know much about motorbikes but I think Biker!Hermione is hot.
Draco is going to love her. Looking forward to them moving closer.
I liked the explination of Sirius\' re-birth. Glad he\'s back.
person Me
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far!
person Faye
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did a wonderful job on this so far, I can\'t wait to read more. I was raised in a motorcycle family and I didn\'t notice anything out of place, and I love that you have Hermione as smart and sassy. I also like how Sirius is described, he sounds like he d lod look like oyfroyfriend, he has long black hair and a stag tattoo on his arm. I also how you describe the magaizine spread. I LOVE THIS STORY! Please update soon, I love it.
person reader
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i read life time mate and i liked it so i figured i would read
this, and i like it. i hope you finish it i starts off well. update soon.

reader