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for THE PHOENIX

by tas

person Wicked_Slytherin
schedule January 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I loved this so much! From start to finish it was a great ride. 

person Trelweny
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must confess that when I saw "Hermione" and "motorcycle" in the summary I was wary. However you managed to give a credible account to Get her there. Similar was my stance on the Harry/Hermione pairing and you handled That pleasantly as well. I really loved how you brought Sirius back (probably one of my favorite reasons to read HP fanfiction) and that He was the one to introduce her to cycles, especially considering his flying cycle which Hagrid borrowed back in the first book.

Adored the interplay between the leading couple. So hot, so dynamic. I enjoyed every minute of reading this story. I do pretend Draco had a dragon tattoo instead of a snake though. :winks: Just imagine it would be more personal than his house symbol, and a step further from Voldemort imagery. That's all. Loved the notion that Draco was the last to get ink of the three though. For some reason it tickled me crazy.

Can't argue any fic that gets Snape a sweetie either. Especially a Fun one.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! I have an idea for a story that you can write 'if your still writing'. A HP/HG/DM and I want harry to be the way his is in 'A SINISTER HALLOWEEN'. Now Harry and Draco don't have to be involved with ea other but they can I don't mind either way -_^! I just Love when Harry has that 'I don't give a shi what you think, bad boy' Attitude!!! But to add HG and DM in the mix... *faint* lol. If you could email me if you will or wont'/can't wirte it or if you now someone that can! That would be great! E-mail - family4ever858109@yahoo.com
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wait, if this is chapter two, what happened to chapter one?
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh it was at the end, awesome story :)
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mitamay
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a very good fic! The cycliing circuit idea was awesome and very unique! I was hooked all the way! EM
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Minx
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it
It was excellently written and I loved your ideas as well as the twists
I loved the way you ended it and hope to read more good stories from you
I cant find anything to complain about WELL DONE