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Great chapter. I am curious how Hermione will react now that she has been marked. Will she be fighting passion and lust that she now has for Draco? Will she give into it right away? Somehow I doubt that.
I think it would be really interesting if they got to know each other. If Hermone told him about her hopes for her future, how this (her and Draco) wasn\'t something she planned, how ironic it all was. They were enemies and now they are to be mates. Wouldn\'t have happened in her wildest dreams, I\'m sure.

It\'s a fun fic. Thanks for writing it.
Cheers.
(One minor edit thing... the paragraph that starts \"As he came closer\", the word is \'waist\' not \'waste\'.)

I love the story so far. The setup is awesome. You should definitely finish it (if u werent planning to that is ^.^)

I love Veela!Draco fics and this one has two Veela for the price of one!
I like how you are setting up the story and I thought the scene between GW/BZ was very hot. Can\'t wait to read more. Do you have an email notice list?

Update already! I love your story, it\'s an interesting twist and one that I would like to see elaborated (update). I\'d like to see Draco\'s take on this situation. Hermione\'s reaction is exactly what I would expect out of her character. So far the story is very well written, you have a good start to what will hopefully be a good story. Now update!

T Deb

Please update i an realy looking forward to the next chapter :)

don\'t stop writing!!!!
you are fantastic
can\'t wait for the next chapters

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Fantastic! I adore Blaise Zabini. Also het veela stories. Write on!

i love it i love it i love it i love it, lots o cookies 4 u, update update update, pleeeeaaaassssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee xxx

I\'m intrigued to see where you\'re going with this story...as for the formatting, do like someone else said and put it in word...if don\don\'t have Microsoft Word, try Word Pad.