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Blech, me no likey teh Blaise/Ginny, me wants more of teh D/Hr!

Haha, translation: Blaise/Ginny is boring, I want more D/Hr, damn it!

Good chapter! Please update as soon as you can, can\'t wait to read more!!!!

love it. I have a thing feelaeela!Draco/Mate!Hermione stories and this one is really good so far. and I just know its going to get better and better. I also like the Veela!Boy!Blaise/Mate!Ginny thing. its nice.

AHHHHHH Your awesome! I waited so long for this! I love it!

I am loving this story. I appreciate the depth of thought you are taking to construct the Veela culture. It is good that Blaise & Draco have an internal set of rules and demands on them.
The smut scenes are hot and I am looking forward to more!

I loves fis fic. I honestly do.

I love the Ginny/Blaise aspect. I like that Ginny is a little more accepting of her fate than Hermione is. And I agree with someone else, Blaise is giving me shivers. I want one of him. ;) Also, I think the chess game was a brilliant. Might I suggest you check out the FIRST Thomas Crown Affair. One of the hottest scenes ever filmed was a chess scene in that movie and that\'s what I keep picturing as I was reading about their little game.

I love Hermione and Draco, obviously. I think you\'ve set this part up really well, because I honestly don\'t think that Hermione would ever be completely accepting of something quite like being told she\'s to be someone\'s mate. I like that you\'ve made her fight it, but give in an inch or two. Draco\'s frustration is understood, but he really has no one to blame for how she reacts to him except for himself. He made that bed, and now he has to untangle himself from it.

A few other things, I\'m also interested to know what the second mark entails as well as the outcome of what will happen when Pierce is roomed with Hermione. That can\'t be a good situation for her, but one can onlpe tpe that he takes Draco\'s warning. If not, god help that poor boy. Draco is much more possessive. I loved his line about only one beating for trying to harm a mate? Genius.

Alright, just thought I\'d finish by saying, I just love this and hope you write more soon. I don\'t really review that often, but I know what I like, and I really like this.

I love this story! It\'s awesomely original. Keep it up!

i just love this story plz can u update it faster the anticpation is worth the wait but i just cant wait to read the next story

I\'m loving your fic, and I\'m eager for your next chapter! Just _please_ format your story, it\'s hao reo read it as it is.

I love it but need more