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by powerski8086

person Triospleasure
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do more..Doitdoitdoitdoitdoitdoitdoit......


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person Kinky Girl
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
But next time, please focus more on Draco/Hermione.
Make them fuck real hard.
person Amy
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG You had sooooo better plan on there being a second chapter...cause i want MORE!!!!!!! UR INCREDIBLE...KEEP IT UP!
person DemonicAngel
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I may make a suggestion. Although the pwp is good you may wish to separate the paragraphs more. You have the conversations running together when there should be more space between each characters statement.
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person cofaym
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um, can there be a sequil to this cuz... wow