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for With Three You Get Eggroll

by BrianMcCrary

person Greiver666
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story please write more like when in hogwats and after ginny joins the fun
person James
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was some story. well written, fantastic and very imaginative idea. I loved reading about hermione michevious side, especially the see thur robe and my all time favorite little school girl and the short plaid skirt, whoa!

I thought this story was very good, well thought out. I could tell what was coming, or at least I was hoping what was coming, and it all came true. I love the way you brought Ginny problem with the chamber of secrets and cause of that and herng wng with Harry, she never gotten over harry and all guys she matched them up agains harry. what a wonderfully idea.

And of course me being a guy, the all time greates fantasy of every male that I have ever talked to about this, is to have two women together as sex partners. to have them both in love with you make it even better.

Also when harry popped ginny cherry! the way you did it was so cool, what was the saying, blood for blood strike me as perfect.

Finally what I am trying to say is, I have read a lot!!!!!!! of Harry Potter fanfiction on this a5 or5 or 6 other sites and this story here has been moved to my all time favorites which this is number 7.

thank you for a very good time while reading your story...
person americanwerewolf
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that story wa fir first fan fic and it gets three thumbs up. its two bad it had to end. if all fan fics are that good my monthly internet bill is likely to sky rocket

cheers
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person oldwolf
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Screwier then a good pitch, but excellent. Top notch pwp. A bit more in the way details wouldn\'t be remiss at all. I hope that this is continued.
person CiA
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice.... more PLZ!
person lordanhur
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow wow
great i wou love to see some more before or after this fic, amazing. how about one with Ron\'s sex life with the girls or maybe the twins
person Andrian
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very clever and mature smut. Enjoyed it immensely
person Joe Hundredaire
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you do a sequel/spin-off/prequel/whatever, let me know. So many of the little references could be made into entire stories (Remus/MultiplyShapedTonkses) and I\'d love to get more on the life of HP+HG+GW. :)
person dave gerecke
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think one is better than the other one which you posted yesterday.
More devlopement, I guess.
Enjoyed reading it.
person dave gerecke
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Went looking for other stories that you wrote as I was guessing that you were referring to them in your story.
Sad to say, you have only done this one - on this forum.
dave