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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t dislike it (to the author). It\'s perfect for what it is. Short, curt, urgent. Very hot.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!! That was great!!! Loved it, every word!!! I thought the last two sentences were perfect.
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* That last line had me laughing out loud, I didn\'t see it coming! I think you have a great story here, my only criticism is that there are some spelling and grammatical errors, which can be easily fixed. Just get yourself a good beta. Other than that, it was fun! Thanks!
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L
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L
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you it could have been better. but there is always a thing you can do better. I liked it, the end had me laughing.