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for Wraith

by webbapettigrew

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schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very creative of you to use Peter. Is there any specific reason for it? It\'s nice to read something other than Harry/Draco or Draco/Hermione etc. for a change. I encourage you to keep on writing... you\'re on the right track. I enjoyed your fic alot and I\'d love to read more.

Keep up the good work.
If you don\'t mind terribly, perhaps could you read and review some of my work. I value your opnion and I respect you as a writer b/c I have seen what you are capable of.

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person Roget
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
VERY interesting! I am curious to see what is going to happen - will she wake up and find herself in Harry's arms? Or has she been moaning the wrong name in her sleep? Hmm, seems like alot of different directions to go from here!

Very well written, too many typos, but that's all.

Thanks bunches!!