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for Dark Allure

by Caelestia

person stray523
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style and your ideas for pairings. Keep up the good work honey.
person JenJen
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am definitly intruiged. Your writing style is unique and I like the plot you are heading into. I am quickly becoming a fan of the trio being "together". From your description that is one of the reasons I open the story to read. I am curious what Hermione will find when the bloody hand takes hold.

Good job!
person Gabrelen
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't care much for the shortness of chapter two...it would probably read better if it was placed at the end of chapter one. The title seems to fit very well what Hermione is and will be going through. Normally I stop reading fics where authors beg for reviews, but your story is worth the hassle. If you just show a little more confidence with this story, more people will leave reviews.
person viviane v.c.
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uuuh, you bad girl!! Such an evil cliffy!!! But i really like the story!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting story so far! so what's up with these books... can't wait to find out.
hope you keep it going
person anon
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far, and for chapters that haven't been beta'd there is an amazing lack of technical mistakes. In the story summary it says 'F/M/M'. So I'm assuming Hermione/Harry/Ron. That'd be fun. But since you asked about pairings, I beg you to not let the story end Hermione/Ron. I'm sorry, but that's the one ship I can't touch with a ten foot pole. Keep up the good writing, and please update soon!
person PhoenixAngel
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!!!!!! Can\'t wait until there\'s more!!!!!