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for Chaotic Bashness

by Learic

schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
am angry at them all except for snape ofcourse!! poor snape man poor poor snape man!! those idiots poor snape like always acused of everything when he didnt do anything wrong (except get revenge on hermione and put that potion in her culdron but thats not really his fault coz she shouldnt have drank it as he told them not to take or drink some) how can they base there facts and make acusation based on rumours that they heard from someone who is out to get snape how can they base it on rumours that are in this etc case are NOT true? how can they think he raped her when he was only helping her?? and restrain him like an animal like that when they didnt even hear etc the whole story about what happend I mean harry didnt finish his story and the midwitch didnt even start side of what happend (and how come the midwitch didnt say anything about the cum coming down hermione's legs that was hermione and not snapes? how come they didnt test like they would to in the muggle world to see whos cum it was that was on her before making horible acusations like such as like this towards him???) and how can they think he raped her when snape didnt even get a chance to say his side of the story?? use the truth potion and get you facts straight those idiots!!!!!!!
poor snape man poor poor snape man!!!! i LOVE snape but I also LOVE hermione too!!!! Blessed Be........

PS more more more chapters etc to this BRILLIANT story!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks xxxxxxxxxxxxx
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what was the potion he put in her cauldron and has it reaced badly with the potion they were making the Draught of happiness?? and how come harry or ron ddint notice that snape was trying to put something in hermiones cauldron? and why didnt ron or harry go to hermione when she started to act funny and all when she drunk the potion with the thing that snape put in her Draught of happiness??? it doesnt make sense!!!
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
why didnt anyone else if not harry and ron notice him put something in her caldron and why didnt anyone else help her when she stared to act funny after taking that potion??????????
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Liquid was running down her thighs? did she just have an orgasm one hell of an orgasm from that potion? was it an orgasm potion or something? is it a dark potion?? please reply!!!!!!
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I hope you're still reading fanfiction because I wanted to know if I could adopt your story and complete it.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, what happens?! You gotta update!
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person jen
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this sux. Can\'t believe you haven\'t gotten any bad reviews so far. waste of my time.