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for Marshmallows In Hell

by goodbenny

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person catpower
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I\'m all for Hermione having a fling with Harry before getting down to a long term relationship with SS. In fact I\'d like HG to put it about a bit first! Amazing finger action!
person charli
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey guys!! hmm wet let least i found it. pretty good only one prob- theres only 1 chapt! put up more. & uw whw when harry calls her Mione? that freaks me coz i keep thinkin its ron its jus such a ron thing 2 sthenthen im all lyk \"EW! oh wait, its harry- mmm daniel radcliffe...
person The Black Fairy
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... this is pretty good... did one of you really have that happen? were they hot? who is snape based on? please keep writing i intrigued!
person Lucy
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was nice to actually read the finished product girls! nicely done.
person STEPH!
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i\'d say it was great :) u guys rock... write more ... umm i dunno what to say... hehehe..... i figured out who snape was sposed to be haha..mmmm ...... see ya\'s all later
love steph xx
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story i have ever read in my life. the author is really talented! such a kickass story, cant wait for more...
person Mercurial
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
erm... marshmallows in hell? Intriguing name. Look forward to reading more.

~ Jenna.