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by teshara

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person spaz141
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your stories too *whine* anyway great chapter I\'m enjoying the story. Thanks.
person M
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Snape is the father of the boy right? Wow i am so confused? but great story, maybe you can clear it up in some parts :)
person spaz141
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.
person Heather
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First Chapter:

Oooh...intriguing. What is she doing pregnant? And can she really give up her child? Glad there\'s three more posted to read!!

Heather
person Heather
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls off chair, staring stupidly at computer screen* OH MY GOODNESS! Whoa. Ok. I really want more! What in the world?!?!

Heather
*begging for more, please* Cheezy, yes. Honest though ;)
person lindai
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
teshara.....what a cliff hanger! I have been following this since it came out and have been very strongly identifying with Hermione\'s plight, but never did I see this coming! You have done a beautiful job of showing the emotions that often arise from the relinquishment of your own child to someone else and I commend you for the amount of sensitivity that you have written into the story so far. Please keep up the good work...but not at the expense of the other stories!!! :)
person spaz141
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I just had a heart-attack. Very interesting story. Thanks.
person Linda
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The writing\'s good and I\'m interested in what kind of story you have in mind, but to be honest there\'s not a lot of story here yet. It seems by the fourth chapter there should be more involvement and disclosure of some kind concerning the plot line. I\'m not trying to flame you, but I feel - as a reader - it\'s being strung out too long.
person Alanfan
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to see how this story progresses. It shows a lot of potential, I hope you carry it through to the end. It has a different slant on a story of child of Hermione/ and, I think we know who.