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for Together

by CJMay

schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're right - it's great to see a story that doesn't have slutDraco with Harry saving him. I like reading about a kinda broken Harry who gets together with Draco and they flip the world the bird!
person mittenslady
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story, but the symbols in the middle of the words make it a lot harder to read.
person Cordelia Hunter
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. That's the first thing that came to my mind when I finished this. Both of them seem to be perfect for each other.

The pacing of the story was perfect. I also love how you make up new words like hairaigraight i.e. hair airtight straight. The only roadblocks in the smooth flow of the story were some spelling mistakes which are almost certainly typing mistakes. It would help to put this story through a spell checker.

My favourite part of the story was -

person brie
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah. i\'ll say this once. i loved it! ok..twice..i loved it! lol..but yeah...are you going to write more on it??
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schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re an awesome writer and I really, really loved the fic. Sorry I don\'t have more to say, I just felt like this deserved a review.
person Els
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Very well written, without going over the top with the angst. Slut!Harry was very refreshing - there really is a over-abundance of Slut!Draco/Hero!Harry. And I loved Voldy\'s death. Slicing a head off always works wonders *g*
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Just the right amount of angst, and sorrow and hope, and passion.
Good characterization and believable in-character dialogue.
person Lady X
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I\'ve been here before but I thought I should say again nifty wonderful fic you have here. *tosses cookies* Is there gonna be more or not though? you left just enough space for more. Can\'t wait to read more of your work
Lady X
person somekindofberry
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Very well done ... shame the whole middle of the story was cut out, but at least it ends well!!
person Lady X
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huh...that was interesting and cool. i liked it alot. So are you going to continue it or not?? you could go into a story or even just a sequel if you wanted. well if you de3cide to continue it please e-mail me