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for Devotion

by CJMay

person Anon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Sweet and sentimental, but interesting, a bit funny and wicked as well. And very sexy.

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person Anon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I absolutely love threesomes...well, when they are well done as this one is. Please, may I have some more?

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person Rhelle
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to look all over for a way to review this fic @_@ However, I\'m absolutely in love with it, and you\'ve made me really adore this pairing.

Awesome fic. Just awesome.
person Els
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww! *wants more Harry/Draco/Severus*

Not too sappy at all - just a perfect little cloud of fluff. Awwwwness incarnate.

The Harry/Draco relationship was perfection. The competition-thing rocked! *huge thumbs-up*

You\'ll write more HP-threesomes, right? *tries bambieyes, but proceeds to bribery by means of chocolate and naked men when simple pleading does not work*
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, absolutely droolworthy. You\'re great at writing, and the smut was delicious. I couldn\'t take my eyes off the screen. A great story, thanks for writing it for me ^.^ DO THE MOO, love ya!
person cmere
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo i LOVED this! snape/harry/draco is simply my favorite thing ever and you wrote them very well. i loved the competitiveness between harry and draco. everything was just fabulous (except maybe all of harrys best friends dead) and i loved it loved it loved it.
person mikochef22
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, um well that was just so ..... beautiful, lovely, heart-warming, and SEXY AS HELL!!(hehehe) I was mad for a second that almost everyone died, but I understood at the end that it was a necessary evil to get the final point across. Please keep up the good work and a very very heart-felt Thank You Very Much ;)
person A fan of yours and Hp and the other fanfics
schedule March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE MOREOF THEM LIKE THIS FOR HP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Gill
schedule February 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read quite a few of your fics - and like them! God only knows why I like the slash fics - I guess they make a refreshing change from the SS/HG ones I often enjoy! Keep it going - don't be too concerned about them being OOC. Let's face it - they're already OOC compared to JKR's versions of them!! The power's in the pen (or keyboard). You can make them whatever you want them to be and suckers like me will read!! Of course, the more in character they are, the more familiar they are, but who knows what goes on after the watershed?!!
person mtang
schedule January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely 'little' story. Very well written and with all the backstory, you made this threesome very believable (beliefable?).
You mixed a bit of everything in this story: angst, romance, h&c. Very well balanced and in character.
Thank you and keep writing.