rate_review Reviews

Okay, I only read the second chapter and it does not look as if I am going to find the time to read more in the near future, so sorry for that...

BUT I absolutely had to review! OF COURSE you are german! I knew it tomenoment I read \"Who is Paul anyway?\"! I think it\'s \'Du Darfst\' and that is definitely not an English brand, so I figured you had to be German. Or the joke was unintenional, which would have kinda put a damper on my fun....

Anyway, I think your English is reagoodgood, and I could find no mistakes in your phrasing or such. Well, as you probably figured already that I am German, too, it is for you to decide if you take that as a compliment... Might be that we just make the same mistakes, non?

I like your story in any case and I am mightily proud to see a German author who writes in English running around here! Keep going!

~Lady Espelle

*Gott hat die Erde nur einmal gek

It is truly refreshing to read something with a touch of reality to it. Great job. And write the Polyjuice scene! (And perhaps in this one they will finally be able to better understand each other\'s wants and needs.)

That is how most first times are... or more like it anyway.
I loved how Hermione was her bossy-boots self. Damn that book!
I also appreciated the rousing 1 minute of love making that Severus managed with his below average 5 inches. It is too funny.
Is there only 1 chapter left? Is it going to be the morning after? Will she demand satisfaction from him or will they just work on it together?
Very curious to see what\'s next.
Cheers.

Some parts of this chapter were all too familiar *shudder.* Well done, that was horrible sex, poor Severus and Hermione. I await the next chapter, thanks.

Weil meinmeine Muttersprache so sehr liebe (und zu faul bin englisch zu schreiben-wie eben auch bei ff.net):
Die Kapitel sind verdreht. O.o Du hast erst den Disclaimer und die Regeln, dann das 2. und dann das 1. Kapitel. Wollt ich nur sagen, falls es von den anderen Reviewern noch keiner getan hat. Sonst wieder ein sehr geniales Kapitel. Ich hab die ganze Zeit ein Bild im Kopf: Hermine und das Kamasutra Buch. *lol* Au

This is so good, please update soon!

OK, I\'m a little confused - did you by chance post chapter 2 ahead of chapter 1? or is it a flashback? I like the way it\'s going other than that.

10 stars baby! very cute. i like the whole snape being shy angle your going with. i don\'t think i\'ve seen it before...ever. a nice touch tho. can\'t wait for the next chapter!

This is fun. IMHO I don\'t like Alan Rickman as Snape - I think he\'s too old for the character. However, I developed a huge crush on him in Sense and Sensibility. Including him in your story made for a good laugh. Thanks, I look forward to more as you have the time.

I love your use of Shakespeare to bring these two together, it adds something to the story... not quite sure what. Something good. Intellect, maybe? No, they\'re smart enough. Something classic. Either way, I really like it. I love that Snape refused to respond to the owl, how cute and (above all) Snape-ish! Their jealousy is really amusing, they\'re so possessive already. Now about this sharing with Mr. Rickman... UPDATE