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for Smoke and Fire

by Skool

person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They're so awkward. Love it.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Polyjuice?
And the whole extra kink thing I didn't really understand but maybe I'm just being dumb tonight. Bleeh.
person Queeny
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This challenge seems to be lots of fun.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how they're real!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. >>
person a_reader
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was too funny, too real, and painful, lol. How dare you inject reality into our fantasies??? ;) Well done.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Velvetina
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow awsome story, i can\'t imagine how hard it must have been to keep them crap in bed geez! I loved it though and please please write the polyjuice sequal, pretty please i\'d love it so much!!!