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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo this is gettin goooooood. i wanna see what happens next so update!!!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice
the quality of the writing (grammer, spelling, etc.) can be worked on but it really doesn\'t matter.. i totally look past that!
this story is ADDICTING!! you\'ve started some really really great ideas and i\'d loveee to see them develop and have the story advance!!
keep it up, please!!!!
i hope i helped!
xo
the quality of the writing (grammer, spelling, etc.) can be worked on but it really doesn\'t matter.. i totally look past that!
this story is ADDICTING!! you\'ve started some really really great ideas and i\'d loveee to see them develop and have the story advance!!
keep it up, please!!!!
i hope i helped!
xo
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fun! I like the phone idea! Write soon!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more?? I want to find out what happens!!!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you and please continue to review! :)
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise... the fact that you changed Hermione\'s character over the summer made the plot much more real.
My only problem is the lack of proofreading. Um, taught instead of \'thought\' - I caught that one quite a few times. I dunno... those type of mistakes jump out at me (I\'m also a writer), and when I\'m reading a really hot scene and I come across one - it\'s like a splash of cold water. lol
So, that\'s just my suggestion.
Otherwise, it\'s a good piece... very AU... but that just makes it better!
My only problem is the lack of proofreading. Um, taught instead of \'thought\' - I caught that one quite a few times. I dunno... those type of mistakes jump out at me (I\'m also a writer), and when I\'m reading a really hot scene and I come across one - it\'s like a splash of cold water. lol
So, that\'s just my suggestion.
Otherwise, it\'s a good piece... very AU... but that just makes it better!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soou much for your reviews!!!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yah Blaise, i luv him, more please
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What are you waiting for girl? UPDATE DAMMIT!!!