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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 best one yet! Keep it up, this is one of the best storylines I\'ve ever seen!
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve finally updated! I was so suprised when I saw. Very good third chapter, but I have to say the first chapter might be my favorite though! Please keep updating!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Need...More! MORE!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved Chapter 2 I\' I\'m not a fan of slash... at all. Some kinf of warning for the first chapter would have been nice!!!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new story from Ducky! I ended up having to read the rough tongue part outloud to my husband; he really got a kick out of it as well! Thrst rst two chapters had so much quotable material! I loved the stuff that followed \"Let\'s go to bed\" as well.
I loved the twist at the end of chapter 1. That was unexpected and so much fun. It was an interesting decision to let us in on the secret so early in the story and I think it\'ing ing to really work to your advantage. So many authors would have held that back for a while or even till the end, but I think this will really match your style.
(Minor nit...look out for breath vs bhe..he...it\'s an easy one to miss)
I loved the twist at the end of chapter 1. That was unexpected and so much fun. It was an interesting decision to let us in on the secret so early in the story and I think it\'ing ing to really work to your advantage. So many authors would have held that back for a while or even till the end, but I think this will really match your style.
(Minor nit...look out for breath vs bhe..he...it\'s an easy one to miss)
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are the queen of grossness. I mean that as a compliment. thanks.
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
too hot for words :}~ keep updating
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story! More please!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Keep writing this; it\'s absolutely excellent. I love that it was quite smutty, but you included that bit of romance at the end. And I\'m excited about the other combinations you could do... there are just so many. Blaise Zambini and Ginny ormionmione and Pansy Parkinson or Milicent Bulstrode and Ron!!! I can\'t wait!! :D Keep up the good work!
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... Draco and Harry.. and it was hot. :) I like.