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person Petalsoft
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy you updated! I\'ve been checking on this story and waiting for this chapter. This fic is one of my favorites. Very hot and very sexy. I loved the closet scene and how Harry seemed to be in charge and Draco was more of the \'bitch\', so to speak. And yes, you did a good job with the humor as well. I chuckled at the slapping of Harry\'s ass and Draco\'s stallion comment, also the end was great when Harry let on that he knew Hermione was there! I kind of wondered about that while Draco and Harry were doing their thing. I don\'t know if you plan on keeping Harry and Draco gay, but as you probably know from my story, I love the idea that Hermione may join in. At least it kind of seems that Harry may want it (just got that feeling while reading this chapter). Very good writing and well done. Looking forward to more.
person Petalsoft
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I love this! This story is so much fun and very well written. Naughty, naughty Dumbledore. LOL I\'m very anxious to see what happens in that closet next so please don\'t wait too long to write it! Thanks for the great read! Very sexy and hot.
person Bean
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. However there
person Bean
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humor rather than drama for a change! That\'s good. Maybe you can now use the prefects bath, since both Hermione and Ron are prefects. I think Hanna is also, isn\'t she? I\'ll still skip the slash chapters though.
person sbkar
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now what will happen to Hermione and Neville, Harry and Draco? Will there be high-jinks or switches?
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Submitting my reviews for each chapter separately ;)

Chapter 5:
YAY FOR R/Hr-ness!!! Wahoo!! Go Ron!!
I love this chapter for Ron\'s outburst on Neville! wheeeeeeehaa! *does the tree dance* (er.. trees are very popular among the Accio Firebolt R/Hr shippers :P)
Snape was unfair. Well, isn\'t he always? *drools at the mention of Snape*
..ahem.. where was I? oh yeah, Draco is causing chaos with his behavior. *shoves Draco and Harry into a \'tight\' closet* get on with it! *shakes head* stupid brats. Don\'t realize how sexeh they look together.
..eek! I\'m back to the \'thinking aloud\' mode. whoops! :P *Goes to read chapter 6*

Chapter 6:
*fans self* is it me or it\'s getting hot over here?
That was a hellava chappie! excellent!
At the beginning of the chapter, I was disappointed by Ron\'s behavior. Well, he forgot about his outburst almost instantly. I guess that\'s Ron.. always chickens out and forgets about everything when there are angry girls around. hehe
But then, at the Huff Common Room, it was a blast! er.. need I say more? *zips mouth shut* Okay, you get the picture. I\'m out of words for that one. *points at the first line of ch26 review*
person xgraeyexdesiresx
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This isn\'t really the type of sotry I would usually read, but a friend recommended it. Instantly I was hooked! Please, please write more, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

~\'~ Graye Desires ~\'~
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee!!! I\'m BACK! and reviewing!
Well, I wasn\'t out of country or something.. I just didn\'t have the time to read fanfiction. *punches her face* I\'m bad, I know.
I really missed reading your stories!!! Work is evil. And the patients don\'t help at all! Like on Friday there was one who came to the clinic and I asked him to sit down, and he replied: \"how?\"
I didn\'t know wheather to crack up or explain! lol!!
Anyway, onto the actual review :P
I\'ve just reach ch. 4, and this review concerns it :)
Ron has such a big mouth!!! He could\'ve kept it to himself and confronted Hermione or Neville a bit later when there was no one around. (Especailly not Slytherins!)
But I guess if that happened, the plot would\'ve been a lot more different and it wouldn\'t have the same interesting effect it has now :)
So, Harry is building quite an interest in Draco and he covers his desire buy saying it\'s for knowing what was on Draco\'s mind? ha! Sneaky little nerdbinger. (a friend of mine invented that word :P)
I\'m going to read the next two chapters now and will review tomorrow :) I\'m going to read the other two (SOHG and TBOTBN) that I\'ve missed right after I finish reading this! :D
person Dragboy
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. This has everything just right. Draco has Harry, which is a must. That sex scene was hot! Ron is one lucky boy, with those to ladies, who may fight eachother, but fuck eachother to, thats always good. I\'m not big on Hermione and Neville, but what ever. I am so happy you put Albus and Minera together, it suits them. Their kiss was very really. The only commplaint I have, and this is really nitpicking, is that Susan Brown is mentaly complaining about having Neville as a herboligy partner, this makes no sence because JKR is always refering to how Neville\'s only good subject is Herboligy, and that in the fourth book fo-Madeye gives Neville that Herboligy book to cheer him up, and I\'ll shut up know. The cat thing was nice a pervy, now get in some first years and some foot play and it will be truly kinky. Maybe a Unicorn could play with a Virgin?
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
priceless Fred and George as Devil and Devil?