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for The Sexual Initiation of Severus Snape

by Veresna

person clare_aden
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a very impressive piece of work. Subtle, violent and gripping. I\'m at lost for other words. Well, thanks.
person cindel
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this is fabulous as always hun. You know, I wait for your updates obsessively. I\'m sure it isnt healthy :S It\'s like I need your writing, which is a tad scary really.
person jeannette
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was an interesting story. it was a good ending, or a good place to continue it.
person darkbloom
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, as usual. I really hope our girl gives Snape what for! There aren\'t *nearly* enough stories where he bottoms--and, as a certain Miss Harrison would likely say, \"turn about is, after all, fair play\".
person clare_aden
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still delicious, witty and funny! The hints about the difference of social class are sharp and bitter. Severus is completely in character: planning and pleasing himself. And the crudeness of the sexual scenes coupling with the way the two characters interact is quite interesting. Great work! Looking forward to more... Clare
person cindel
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trish!!!!!!!!!! Oh Trish, Trish youre writing for us again!!!!!!! *jumps on Trish and hugs her* Oh and its quite fabulous I do say oh you wont keep us waiting too long will you Trish?! (Well, that\'s my impression of Jane Austen\'s Miss Steele. What think you? :P) But really Trish I must ask...*raises an eyebrow* were you ever a lady of the night?
person star
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is hot please continue!
person Jeriwen
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, you have a new Snape fic up, I love your writings, and this one seems to be just as promising as the last ones!
person Clare_aden
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was interested in the subject but not sure I liked the way you were dealing with it through the first chapter. The second one changed my mind completely, not to mention the third one. You got me hooked to put it in a nutshell.
I find the way you play with the narrator\'s ignorance of magic very interesting. Severus is most definitly in character, being sarcastic, manipulating, with an interesting touch of youth.
I\'m looking forward to see where you take these two characters and would be very happy to be put on your update list if you have one.
person Uther Pendragon
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would that not man exn excellent Blue movie? Especially if it starred Snape?