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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Well done!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For Fuck's Sake that was superb.
I could have done without the bondage chapters, maybe saved them for another time, but the little parts that included him being a Ligillimens and reading her mind, sharing her thoughts through Occlumency...EFFING BRILLIANT.
I think my favorite, though, was the thorough, utterly Snape-like way in which he inspected her. Simple, bare, utter awesomeness. Snape should be left in your hands, and your hands alone!!!!
I could have done without the bondage chapters, maybe saved them for another time, but the little parts that included him being a Ligillimens and reading her mind, sharing her thoughts through Occlumency...EFFING BRILLIANT.
I think my favorite, though, was the thorough, utterly Snape-like way in which he inspected her. Simple, bare, utter awesomeness. Snape should be left in your hands, and your hands alone!!!!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wauw
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an extraordinary story - you\'ve got an amazing imagination. I was gripped. Hmm - I wonder what else I can find that you have written.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that is imagination put to good use, or maybe actual experience adapted really well. The adult Snape at the end was a really nice finishing touch to a well written story. Hot Sex!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending for a perfect story. I hardly had the impression of meeting a *real* and complex Severus, not that an author had understood him so well.
The narrator\'s point of view is very funny, down to earh and puzzeld/ I really enjoyed the interaction of these two characters.
Many, many thanks for this nice work.
The narrator\'s point of view is very funny, down to earh and puzzeld/ I really enjoyed the interaction of these two characters.
Many, many thanks for this nice work.
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a FANTASTIC writer! Your descriptions are so indepth that it was easy to imagine everything that was happening and how it may have felt. Your persona of Snape is incredibly accurate, and it was believable to think that he may have acted this way the first time. I would LOVE to read about is other escapades, and wonder if you plan to write another story about it? Either way, it was an enjoyable read and I thank you for sharing it.
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* ... Severus Snape: Charmer of wanton women ... although he would probably object to being associated with \"Charms\" in any way.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN! BONDAGE?! Hurry with that next chapter!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!
ok, i am so hooked on this now, it
isn\'t even funny.
this is such a wonderful story, and
you write so well. i do hope you\'re
continuing. ~please, please, please!~
i look forward to more of this delectable
story.
lesslessings~
ldf
ok, i am so hooked on this now, it
isn\'t even funny.
this is such a wonderful story, and
you write so well. i do hope you\'re
continuing. ~please, please, please!~
i look forward to more of this delectable
story.
lesslessings~
ldf