rate_review Reviews

This is an incredibly interesting story. I was not sure if I was going to like the fact that you made their first sexual experience so increidbly difficult, but after reading it and thinking about it, it really only made sence that way. And the slow build of a relationship is often more appealing than the quick burn. After all, a fire with a good foundation burn hotter, longer than one that is all paper and quick to light. Good job. I look forward to more.

This is a most entertaining and clever story! Whenver I see the title, my mind keeps reading it as \"A law unto herself\" for some reason. You have me wondering what Pansy has in mind for Hermione on New Year\'s...uh oh. The way Dumbledore is presented is an interesting twist--kind of from the POV of Snape and Hermione has just figured it out. I would not worry about rushing into the smut yet--it will be the icing on the cake. While you are completing this novellette, I will check out your past works.

I am enjoying your story very much. I appreciate so much that they aren\'t drooling over one another, but they are each starting to work under the other\'s skin. It\'s the fire that is built carefully before the match is struck that burns the longest. Damn, that sounded corny. Anyway, I\'m looking forward to shopping and Boxing Day (and that is rather a first, for me).

P.S. You write very well, additionally, from a technical aspect. I can\'t tell you how much I appreciate THAT, after wading through horrible grammar, inappropriate vocabulary malaprops, scandalous punctuation, all in search of a faintly promising plot that gets mishandled in the end. Your work does not appear to be of that ilk. Thank you so very much.

I love this story!!!! Just wish you\'d update soon. Who would\'ve thought...Snape and Hermione, and they\'re actually getting along somewhat. I\'m interested to see what\'ll happen next.

Awwwww. That is so sweet.

I've enjoyed this story since day one and it's only getting better. That's saying quite a bit for a story that was good straight off the bat. This latest chapter was wonderful - her moving in and deciding to take a page out of Crookshanks's book and sneak up on him. It seems like a very Hermione thing to do. Looking forward to more.

I've been reading your story...it's still a wonderful read. ~Smiles~ Chapter 14 was funny. I can't wait to see more.

hehehe, that was brilliant! another well-done chapter. Of course, I am looking forward to more.
two bs ubs up!
maggie

i love this fic and how it's turning. Hermione could ask some help from minerva if she wants to suceed through.

O.K. you know I really like this story, and before I have enjoyed your teasing but now it is going to far.
Poor Hermione she must be climbing the walls ( I am) what she desperately needs is a night and day
of full on loving.

I am so glad Hermione was glad that Snape enjoyed the chocolate, however, I am sure that she would
prefer him to SUCK on something else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is good, but it seems to be on the wrong net work, perhaps fanfic junior would be approiate.???

Reduced to three stars for Nothing in the story, going anywhere, at all etc.,