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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this even though I have no idea whether or not they will end up together. As friends, they are formidable. As a help for the *snicker* morning breath issue, both muggles and wizards might find that an apple at the bedside table may be a help. A bite or two gets rid of that affliction damn quick. This really is a fantastic read and I am so glad that it has not been abandoned. Thanks, Shiv.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m absolutely loving this story. I\'ve just read all the chapters so far in one sitting and am tired and have eye-strain but I couldn\'t stop reading. Both SS and HG are right in character. Sev seems to be slightly Jeeves-like (his concern about muggle clothing and asking for such small favours as shorter essays - reminds me of Jeeves asking Wooster to throw away an offensive new hat!). I thought the consummation was about right and I bit back a sob when H said \"It was, in a way\" of it being an act of love. Please update soon - I can\'t wait! This is a fic that is very close to how I see the characters and the humour works for me. I don\'t know how H can resist pinning Sev up against the wall and snogging him senseless but you have to admire her restraint! I get twitchy and jealous for her every time the blond witch is mentioned. By the way - does H use Sev\'s bathroom?
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed at the quality of this work. Well done, and please keep going. The consummation was handled rather well, and quite reflective of things can and do happen in \"real life\" under similar circumstances. The fact that Hermione\'s first time with the muggle boy wasn\'t all what she thought it would be was appropriate to the context of the story. Seeing both Serverus and Hermione growing gradually closer in spite of/because of the circumstances is nice also. I look forward to reading onward of ch. 17, and more works.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hullo. Just wanted to tell you that I really like your story, and I hope to see more of it soon. Please update asap.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ps. Please alert of your updating in your LJ, that\'s where I saw this story and I don\'t have a user in here, so I can\'t save it as my favourites... if there\'s anything like that in here :D
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a surprise! I\'m still smirking over Severus\'s embarassment.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I have enjoyed tremendously your story. It`s well written, interesting and amusing.
Hope to read its ending sometime soon.
Hope to read its ending sometime soon.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write a good story. Easiest way to put it, really. I like the strength.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fun. I\'d love to see the New Year\'s party.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story I hope you update soon.