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Thank you for writing a

Hi there :-)

It is an interessting start for an story, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I would have liked this one even more, if at least Hermiones outburst would have been a little bit more in character, but its hard to get \"them --> the characters\" to cooperate in the beginning, isn

Your writing is excellent! Also, stories with ass-kicking, uppity Hermiones give fairies their wings. Write more! Write faster!

Yay! You\'ve finally started publishing this! Anticipating the rest of the story......

Why do I suspect that Dumbledore already has a plan and that neither Severus nor Hermione will much appreciate it? I\'m glad to see you\'ve finally entered the Marriage Law fic arena, and I\'m very much looking forward to your next installment.

Hurrah! No more doormat! Hermione, or Snape being forced in marriage by his father, or lovesick Ron! I\'m really looking forward to seeing this one updated, it promises to be excellent. But Snape bad in bed? New one for you.

Three cheers for Feisty!Hermione. I love this take on the Marriage Law Challenge so far and look forward to more (not that I am nagging Shiv)

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Well worth the wait.

Whilst I\'m sure Hermione has her shaky moments (don\'t we all) I cannot understand how anyone would think she would just roll over and give in completely. I would say a girl with balls, but no, I think possession of breasts is just as valid - balls are not required for strength and determination to do what you believe is right.

I can\'t believe the potential of Hermione as a positive role model for girls and young women has passed so many by (re the discussion on WIKTT - I just have to assume most of them are young to make me feel better), and so completely too. In my humblme, me, my eight year old daughter thinks Hermione is fantastic and I encourage that wholeheartedly. Husband isn\'t using Snape as a role model yet, but I\'m working on him.

Your writing is, as ever, witty and a pleasure to read. No earth shattering critique to offer, just rambling observations, thanks and praise for a good story.

As always Shiv you delight and entertain me. I just hope that the little TOSSER actually apreciates Hermione efforts not to end up as his wife, then he can marry Pansy and live in some control... Still I can not wait to see Severus under the thumb.

Jeanette :)

I love a pissed off Hermione. She must be fun to write, I know she\'s fun to read. Will this be a long story? I hope so, I love all of your other works.

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