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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv,
Oh this is lovely. I had visions of Hermione crumpling up the note andowinowing it in the air at the breakfast table and screaming \'Incendio!\' Albus is down right smarmy, which is not just slightly on the creepy side. I especially appreciated the unexpected comraderie between Madame Pomfrey, Severus, and Hermione. That was very unexpected and quite excellent. I can\'t wait to see where you take this, and for once in reading a fic, I really have no idea what the author\'s gonna be throwing at us.
Angry!Hermione. I love it.
Oh this is lovely. I had visions of Hermione crumpling up the note andowinowing it in the air at the breakfast table and screaming \'Incendio!\' Albus is down right smarmy, which is not just slightly on the creepy side. I especially appreciated the unexpected comraderie between Madame Pomfrey, Severus, and Hermione. That was very unexpected and quite excellent. I can\'t wait to see where you take this, and for once in reading a fic, I really have no idea what the author\'s gonna be throwing at us.
Angry!Hermione. I love it.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuck.. Thats really gross.. But I think I, too, would definitely prefer even greasy ol\' Snape than Dumbledore (then again who wouldn\'t). He\'s just a horny old perv ain\'t he? But that was a clever way to get out of that -almost- mess. Look forward to reading more (like the rest of your stuff).
ArienAstera
ArienAstera
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I remember seeing an earlier version of the Astronomy Tower scene, and I like what you\'ve done with it. Poor Snape - such an innocent bystander!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start on what looks to be a very entertaining story! Love the interaction between the characters - very well written! Maybe I\'m a freak, but I love pervy Dumbledore, but much prefer darling Severus. :) Great job! Keep up the good work and update SOON!!!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter! Perfect! Love Dumbledore\'s approach... dirty old man. Evil!Dumbledore is perfect, and you write him so well (underhandedly evil, not ridiculously in-you-face evil). Okay, cover your ears: Fangirl SQUEEEEEEEE!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sputters*
*snickers*
Oh Shiv, you crack me up! I do love evil!Dumbledore, he\'s so amusing! Plus it\'s nice to have an author whom consistently writes a strong female lead! *gasps in shock* What..... Could that mean some of us actually like that? *winks*
Oh, this was just classic:
The one good thing about dealing with Slytherins is that they didn
*snickers*
Oh Shiv, you crack me up! I do love evil!Dumbledore, he\'s so amusing! Plus it\'s nice to have an author whom consistently writes a strong female lead! *gasps in shock* What..... Could that mean some of us actually like that? *winks*
Oh, this was just classic:
The one good thing about dealing with Slytherins is that they didn
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my. Too, too funny! Loved the Headmaster\'s reaction when he realized she thought he meant snape. LOL
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops. Obviously, I meant when she turned it around to mean Snape and not Dumbledore. He\'s really a perv in this story. :)
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m writing a story of my own, so I\'ve been avoiding starting anything new. I don\'t want to unconsiously \'lift\' any ideas, but when I saw your name as the author I couldn\'t resist. Glad I didn\'t, love it. Always suspected the law couldn\'t bee been passed without Dumbledore\'s approval.
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant beginning. The way you\'ve set up the characters is so well done. It\'s nice to see someone who thinks Hermione might be able to give Lucius a run for his money for once. More soon please.