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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv....I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I like the idea that Draco doesn\'t want her anymore than she wants him and that he realizes that he is as much a pawn of his father as she is the ministry. I also like the fact that Hermione isn\'t an idiot :) or a doormat and that others seem to see and respond to it. Keep up the good (no, great!) writing and ignore the idiots! Linda
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The age gap between Snape and Hermione doesn\'t bother me much, but Hermione and Dumbledore? Say it with me girls-EEEWWWWWW! I love the way you had Hermione deflect Dumbledore\'s \'proposal\', and I can hope that Severus will eventually see it in the same way. This just keeps getting better.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! How supremely entertaining to see Hermione deal with
Dumbledore like that, clever girl. I thought the scene with Draco
(and the broom references) was brilliant. But how is Hermione
to get past the contraceptive ban if she doesn\'t want children?
I look forward to the way you\'re going to inveigle her through
the eye of that particular needle.
Cheers for that - much needed. Kait
Dumbledore like that, clever girl. I thought the scene with Draco
(and the broom references) was brilliant. But how is Hermione
to get past the contraceptive ban if she doesn\'t want children?
I look forward to the way you\'re going to inveigle her through
the eye of that particular needle.
Cheers for that - much needed. Kait
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The final dialogue sequence is perfect! Maybe I think that only because I didn\'t catch where we were going till halfway through it, but still, v. cool. Severus seems a little too interested in Hermione, though. The hangover potion and the infirmary wait make sense in light of his Ch. 1 chat with Minerva and his sympathetic \"drinking isn\'t the solution\" comment, whichgethgether) neatly set up his personality here, but holding her cloak?? Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very happy to see clarification about that broomstick comment.
Brilliant ending for this chapter. So pleased to see Hermione get the best of evil!Dumbledore. Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Have I mentioned that I love you recently?
Brilliant ending for this chapter. So pleased to see Hermione get the best of evil!Dumbledore. Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Have I mentioned that I love you recently?
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ewwwwww, just the thought of Dumbledore wanting to tumble Hermione, you nearly made me lose my breakfast. Write well, I thoughly enjoy the talent of your mind.
Jeanette
Jeanette
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEWWWW! Dumbledore is a perv! Ok, I\'ve gotten that off my cheand and I feel much better. I like that Draco understands that he\'s being manipulated, and the tolerance and compassion on Snape\'s part is excellent, and I really like your Poppy Pomfrey this time. But what I like the most is that the idea for whom to marry (that coincidentally fits all of Dumbledore\'s qualifications) is Hermione\'s. Excellent.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bites lip*
*laughs*
Oh, that was classic. Having Dumbledore be suggesting himself and Hermione turning it around on him by saying thae the thought he was suggesting Snape. Just wonderful. And the drinking scene with Hermione and Draco...oddly bonding. I liked it.
*laughs*
Oh, that was classic. Having Dumbledore be suggesting himself and Hermione turning it around on him by saying thae the thought he was suggesting Snape. Just wonderful. And the drinking scene with Hermione and Draco...oddly bonding. I liked it.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... This is FABULOUS!!! 1st the situation with Draco, followed by Severus sitting with her & Poppy speaking her mind... BEAUTIFUL!!! The best part of all was how she shot Albus down, that was PERFECT!!! I am very much looking forward to chapter 3!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Dumbledore proposing, he\'s hit a new level of evil/disgusting. Excellent twist Shiv, can\'t wait to see Severus\'s reaction.